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Illustration Critique

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Parkinsonsniper
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Message posted at 04/04/2012, 03:05:06 AM by Parkinsonsniper
Hi everyone...

I'm very new at illustration area. This is my second attempt of illustration and it is just accepted. First one was a extremely simple sun-house-tree drawing, it was expectedly rejected because of simplicity.

So can I have some feedback about this first accepted illustration. I know that it is not a state of the art...just a simple yin yang.

Here it is...

   Yin Yang   
- 2x Nikon D300 - Olympus e-PM1 - Nikkor 20mm f2.8 ...

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TMarchev
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Message posted at 04/04/2012, 03:23:12 AM by TMarchev
Just make background with curves or small elements, black end white and this in center with light in back. That orange/yellow background in not good for this... will be good if those sign is sun :) I repeat make background with same theme and try to give it volume.

P.S. sorry for my bad English... good day!


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Parkinsonsniper
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Message edited at 04/04/2012, 03:36:29 AM by Parkinsonsniper
Hmmm...I got it. You say have a harmonic background with volume and depth. Thanks

(no problem about your English. Mine is bad too, so I can easily understand yours :)
- 2x Nikon D300 - Olympus e-PM1 - Nikkor 20mm f2.8 ...

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